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moroneyk
Jul 18, 2005, 12:43 PM
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Taken yesterday, The problem starts at the back of a large cave and exits up a steep wall. I like the cloud of dust blown up. What do you think, Is the dof too large? What about the framing/contrast etc???
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melekzek
Jul 18, 2005, 5:47 PM
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i would say, dof is even small, i would prefer the talent in focus.
Very nice texture on the rock, and it matches the chalk cloud. lovely tonal distribution.
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overlord
Jul 18, 2005, 6:03 PM
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id like a bit more space around the subject. i kinda get a feeling like im being choked when looking at it. could you crop it a little less or is that the original????
i really like the texture of the rock though. sweet touch.
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overlord
Jul 19, 2005, 1:12 PM
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i REALLY like that color one... id just remove the tick marks :oops:
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sonyhome
Jul 21, 2005, 7:25 AM
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The chalk cloud on the 1st pic is nice. The stiching on the pants distrct my eye, and also bugs me... feels like he's climbing in jeans.
The 2nd pic is good too, but I'd crop some of the bottom to make the subject off-centered. Seeing the hint of textured roof is nice.
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