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ryw
May 26, 2006, 1:41 PM
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Hi Ladies,
I'm hoping to prevail upon someone's expertise and love for rock climbing. I am not a climber and recognize all of you would rather climb than write or read about it, so I promise not to take up much of your time.
I'm writing a story where one of my character's hobbies is rock climbing. Given I've no experience in the area, I'm looking for someone to edit the paragraghs where my character embarks on a short climb.
I'm not looking for grammatical writing. Just for you to tell me in your opinion 1) what's missing, 2) what technical bits could be added to give the scene deapth and 3) how the scene "feels" to you.
My goal is to have the scene be riveting to the non climber but believable to someone who climbs.
I'd list and give you kudos at the end of the novel for your time. If you're willing to lend assistance, please email me here or at: robynwilliams@msn.com
Thanks again for your time!
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ryw
May 27, 2006, 11:17 AM
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Hello again. Now that I've got my own personal climber, aka, ghost-writer extraordinaire, just wanted to say that I admire each of you for what you do. Continuous safe and happy climbing to all...
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