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overlord
Nov 16, 2006, 11:00 PM
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thats a pretty good shot. im kindof sleepy, so this will be just surface and quick... its croped a bit too much on the bottom. the fingers shold be whole. how would you feel without your fingertips? a bit more of the face next time, please. for some reason the spotters shoes really stick out (gotta be the color). he should remove them next time
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epoch
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Nov 17, 2006, 2:00 AM
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The comopsition is very good in this shot. It immediately drew my attention to the climber and what she was doing. I will agree that the cropping on it could be improved, but I think that may be due to the fact that she was reaching out of the frame. If it weren't for overlord I'd have never minded about the spotter's shoes. But because he said not to look at them, they were the only thing I could stare at. If the shot was a little wider it would be better. I'd like to see where she's going.
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krillen
Nov 20, 2006, 6:31 PM
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A bit more room all around, but technically fine.
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chanceboarder
Nov 20, 2006, 7:30 PM
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Yeah I agree with the cropping and having a little more in the photo. I shot this blind while standing on top of the boulder and just holding the camera out to try and get a better perspective on the scene so I didn't even see what was in frame when I shot. Thanks for the comments everyone. Jason
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deepplaymedia
Nov 23, 2006, 11:44 AM
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yeh as was said, more room on the btm & left some eye contact would be swell technically this isnt too bad at all but sorry matey, it just doesnt do anything for me...
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