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Paul_Y
Feb 18, 2008, 5:14 PM
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Emilie on the campus board. Incorporating your critiques from my earlier Campus Boarding post to a new photo. Wider crop, more balanced lighting, motion blur, and a dash of thong just for some interest . Critiques welcome. Thanks in advance.
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melekzek
Feb 19, 2008, 9:17 AM
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I think this is a better framing than your previous take, but.... motion blur good, handshake blur bad
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Paul_Y
Feb 19, 2008, 4:13 PM
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Melezek, Thank you for your comments. I redid the photo and removed hand blur and left a tad motion blur, and reposted it.
(This post was edited by Paul_Y on Feb 19, 2008, 4:15 PM)
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krillen
Feb 21, 2008, 3:04 PM
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I think you still need to freeze her head or at least her eyes. Right now everything is shakey.
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uptick
Feb 21, 2008, 3:55 PM
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Nice that her thong matches her shirt... Sorry. Couldnt resist.
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uptick
Feb 21, 2008, 5:07 PM
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I like the lighting. May have been better to get more of her face. Expressions tell the story. Like this one better than the last boarding post.
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