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Re: [norfolk] Feedback on my new website:
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sp115
Nov 25, 2011, 3:34 AM
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Registered: Apr 17, 2007
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Nice images and layout, but you need a serious rewrite of your bio. There are ways to infuse it with your personal vibe, but as it stands it's awkward, amateurish and filled with grammatical errors. No offense intended, you seem like you can deliver the results, just have a professional work with you on on the written content.
Btw, it loads quick and looks nice on an iPhone...
(This post was edited by sp115 on Nov 25, 2011, 3:36 AM)
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