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akraft
Sep 3, 2011, 3:02 AM
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hello there well around next july im gunna be rolling through redwing for the weekend so i i was hoping i could get some local climbers to climb with i have yet to climbing there so if you got any info i should know please let me know thanks andrew
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uni_jim
Sep 3, 2011, 5:26 AM
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akraft wrote: hello there well around next july im gunna be rolling through redwing for the weekend so i i was hoping i could get some local climbers to climb with i have yet to climbing there so if you got any info i should know please let me know thanks andrew
Sentence structure, dude. It'll get you places.
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uni_jim
Sep 3, 2011, 5:30 AM
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Try this:
akraft wrote: Hello there! Next July I'm going to be rolling through Redwing for a weekend and I was hoping that I might meet some local climbers to climb with. I have not yet climbed there, so if you could share any info, I would appreciate it! Thanks in advance! Andrew
(This post was edited by uni_jim on Sep 3, 2011, 5:31 AM)
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livinonasandbar
Sep 3, 2011, 11:17 AM
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uni_jim wrote: Try this: akraft wrote: Hello there! Next July I'm going to be rolling through Redwing for a weekend and I was hoping that I might meet some local climbers to climb with. I have not yet climbed there, so if you could share any info, I would appreciate it! Thanks in advance! Andrew
Hmm, or perhaps:
Hello.
I plan to be in Redwing during a weekend next July and hope to meet several local climbers with whom I might climb. Meanwhile, since I am unfamiliar with Redwing, I will be grateful for any information about the surrounding area that you might share with me.
Sincerely,
Andrew
(This post was edited by livinonasandbar on Sep 3, 2011, 11:19 AM)
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